Author Topic: Need help with translation (Read 2795 times)

Pawel83 · « **on:** July 20, 2008, 09:58:37 PM »

I have to write a wedding invitation in English. Could someone check that for me please?

This is how it looks:

Mr.XXX and Mrs YYY
together with our Parents
cordially invite

Mr. ZZZ

to share in the celebration of our wedding
Saturday, the twenty seventh of September 2008
at five oâ€™clock in the evening in Bożego Ciała Church, Busko-ZdrÃ³j.

After the celebration in the church
you are invited to the wedding reception in â€œFinezjaâ€ Restaurant,

Would be grateful if You could help me

ChrisRLewis · « **Reply #1 on:** July 20, 2008, 10:26:52 PM »

pawel

it looks a bit muddled and needs a bit of simplifying, perhaps along the lines of these samples
http://www.weddingguideuk.com/articles/planning/invitationwording.asp

Pawel83 · « **Reply #2 on:** July 20, 2008, 10:39:50 PM »

Quote from: "ChrisRLewis"

http://www.weddingguideuk.com/articles/planning/invitationwording.asp

This is just what I needed. Thanks!

dajwid · « **Reply #3 on:** July 21, 2008, 03:46:04 PM »

HI if you want send it to me in Polish I will translate it and proof read it.

Pawel83 · « **Reply #4 on:** July 21, 2008, 11:36:52 PM »

This is not necessary Dajwid. Ive chosen one of the texts from the website with samples. Do you speak Polish?